http://miracleofraredevice.unsquare.com/2007/01/21/california-queen/ Blogging and shameless self-promotion Fri, 23 Apr 2010 00:54:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://miracleofraredevice.unsquare.com/2007/01/21/california-queen/comment-page-1/#comment-22 bill bonds Fri, 16 Mar 2007 04:03:36 +0000 http://miracleofraredevice.unsquare.com/?p=29#comment-22 This is my favorite of the group. Illustrates the fact that loneliness can sometimes be worse when you are not alone. Also how war changes people, sometimes for the worse. Good use of metaphors and similies - not overworked. Might rethink the mucus ball puke thing. Somehow seemed out of context. This is my favorite of the group. Illustrates the fact that loneliness can sometimes be worse when you are not alone. Also how war changes people, sometimes for the worse. Good use of metaphors and similies – not overworked. Might rethink the mucus ball puke thing. Somehow seemed out of context.

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