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	<title>Comments on: The Dead Pet Shop</title>
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		<title>By: beau</title>
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		<description>I loved this story.  Nice job easing me into the emotions of the girl.

I like how the frustrated writer is a recurring theme in your stuff.  Ex. the poet in Sould who couldn&#039;t turn a phrase after he sold his soul.  And in some ways, Frankenstein in the audition short story.  It&#039;s always funny and honest.

The ending was absolutely perfect.

Here are a couple of things I noticed:

pg 2, That 2nd sentence is a little awkward, maybe I&#039;m reading it wrong.  Also, on line 7 it says, &quot;he&#039;d would...&quot;

4th line from the bottom of pg 5, &quot;And by then end...&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved this story.  Nice job easing me into the emotions of the girl.</p>
<p>I like how the frustrated writer is a recurring theme in your stuff.  Ex. the poet in Sould who couldn&#8217;t turn a phrase after he sold his soul.  And in some ways, Frankenstein in the audition short story.  It&#8217;s always funny and honest.</p>
<p>The ending was absolutely perfect.</p>
<p>Here are a couple of things I noticed:</p>
<p>pg 2, That 2nd sentence is a little awkward, maybe I&#8217;m reading it wrong.  Also, on line 7 it says, &#8220;he&#8217;d would&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p>4th line from the bottom of pg 5, &#8220;And by then end&#8230;&#8221;</p>
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